Feedback from First Edit

Media video changes 

1. First shots: Jodie first then guitar then back to Jodie 
2. 0.14 secs - close up of smarts playing guitar
3. 0.20 seconds - slow down walking shots 
4. 0.25 seconds - classic stabilise 
5. 0.31 seconds - change transition 
6. Extend shot of smarts singing “holding something we don’t need”
7. 0.53 secs: 3 pans in a row in same direction must change! Get rid of shot saying ‘just let it be’
8. Get rid of shot of smarts lying down on grass and shot of sky 
9. 1:08 secs - change lighting (too bright)
10. 1:12 secs - close up of smarts looking upset after Jodie slaps hand 
11. 1:18 - change walking shots to more flashbacks 
12. 1:30 - break up flashbacks between field walking 
13. 2:23 - close up of rock rippling water needed after I throw rock
14. 2:25 - zoom in to cut out people walking 
15. 2:34 - get rid of shot me looking over river
16. Montage of good times (flashbacks at the end) e.g Chinese lanterns/fireworks
17. Put in some close ups